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Backstory:
The commander of the Cruiser, named Yallery calls for here top Ranger to come to the command bridge. He arrives being flanked and escorted by two marines. The marines stop at the door, as he continues forward. Yallery called him to lead a small group of Marines and Rangers to cover a specific region of Bakura, and to try to oust the Czerka from there.
Dialogue:
”What do I owe the pleasure commander”, he says. “Hello, I have some important decisions and information to tell you about, but it most be kept secret”, she says. He replies by saying, “Yes, I will, if you think I am up to the task”. She pulls up a hologram of the region and starts explaining Czerka positions, landmarks, and other things to the Ranger. He hears a lot about farmers, and open land. She says, “We don’t know very much, so you will have to find out more on your own”. “Take your team and some marines with you to complete the task, and don’t disappoint me”. “Clear the bridge!”, she yells”. He says, “Thanks commander, I will not disappoint you”. He leaves the bridge.
I like the panels and the tubing! The hologram table is also a nice touch. My only criticism is that it isn't very photo friendly. By having walls on all sides, it's hard to get a good angle for your photo.
Nice first post. Welcome to the club!
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@cyrusbuilds You are right, thanks for the feedback! I love including details, glad you liked them!
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