The Cruisers Comman...
 
Notifications
Clear all

[Solved] The Cruisers Command Bridge

6 Posts
4 Users
1 Reactions
194 Views
(@cosmic-studios)
Posts: 224
Reputable Member Bryx Security Bureau
287
Topic starter
 

[Admin] Entry Score | 3 XP

Backstory:

The commander of the Cruiser, named Yallery calls for here top Ranger to come to the command bridge. He arrives being flanked and escorted by two marines. The marines stop at the door, as he continues forward. Yallery called him to lead a small group of Marines and Rangers to cover a specific region of Bakura, and to try to oust the Czerka from there.

https://flic.kr/p/2npMfjz


Dialogue:

”What do I owe the pleasure commander”, he says. “Hello, I have some important decisions and information to tell you about, but it most be kept secret”, she says. He replies by saying, “Yes, I will, if you think I am up to the task”. She pulls up a hologram of the region and starts explaining Czerka positions, landmarks, and other things to the Ranger. He hears a lot about farmers, and open land. She says, “We don’t know very much, so you will have to find out more on your own”. “Take your team and some marines with you to complete the task, and don’t disappoint me”. “Clear the bridge!”, she yells”. He says, “Thanks commander, I will not disappoint you”. He leaves the bridge.

 

https://flic.kr/p/2npPEvP

 

https://flic.kr/p/2npMfnF

This topic was modified 2 years ago by Cosmic Studios
This topic was modified 2 years ago by Darth Bjorn
 
Posted : 04/06/2022 11:29 am
Eyrezer reacted
(@cyrusbuilds)
Posts: 299
Reputable Member Followers of the Force Faction Leader
36
 

I like the panels and the tubing!  The hologram table is also a nice touch.  My only criticism is that it isn't very photo friendly.  By having walls on all sides, it's hard to get a good angle for your photo.

 
Posted : 09/06/2022 3:03 am
Eyrezer
(@eyrezer)
Posts: 228
Reputable Member Followers of the Force
621
 

Nice first post. Welcome to the club!


Followers of the Force
New Jedi Order
https://www.flickr.com/photos/eyrezer/

 
Posted : 09/06/2022 7:30 pm
(@cosmic-studios)
Posts: 224
Reputable Member Bryx Security Bureau
287
Topic starter
 

@cyrusbuilds You are right, thanks for the feedback! I love including details, glad you liked them!

 
Posted : 11/07/2022 2:01 am
(@cosmic-studios)
Posts: 224
Reputable Member Bryx Security Bureau
287
Topic starter
 

@eyrezer Thanks!

 
Posted : 11/07/2022 2:01 am
(@darth-bjorn)
Posts: 872
Veteran Member Admin Faction Leader
257
 

[Admin] Entry Score | 3 XP

GM

 
Posted : 06/08/2022 7:52 pm