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Following the Senate meeting on Chandrilla, Representative Niala heads home to Naboo, but on her way, finds herself on an unlikely search for some wayward medical supplies that have been tracked to The Ring of Kafrene.
A former classmate from the legislative youth program, Stellan Monfres, left Naboo in search of more nefarious ambitions and ended up as the self-proclaimed, Mayor of The Ring.
Usually, Niala would not attend to such matters personally, but as her agents have found no trace of the supplies, she sees no other option than to sort out her former flame amongst the dangerous alleyways of the Ring.
This topic was modified 2 years ago by RocketBoy
Posted : 26/07/2022 6:43 am
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Love this sam, great job with the lighting and fog effect!
Posted : 26/07/2022 8:06 am
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I love everything about this! The greebling is just fantastic and the lighting is perfect!
Posted : 29/07/2022 3:31 pm
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Great urban entry. It really captures the overall vibe of a run down urban environment. I'd say there's still a lot of room for improvement on the greebeling. "There's an art to making small greeble objects, and then connect them via wires, tubes etc., to make them feel like they have purpose and function. I think there was a really good quote on this, in the first Episode of the new ILM series on Disney+... Some of the greebling feels a bit too random/ad-hoc... Ending on a high, I have to highlight your color-use. The palette for the entire build is great, and the dark red really pops, without feeling disconnected - that's a feat!
Great job!
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Posted : 06/08/2022 12:10 pm
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Brilliant brilliant brilliant. My only feedback is the pink turban kind of clashes with the other colors, but that's such a nitpick. The build and atmosphere is incredible! Great editing on the smoke and lights, impressive stuff.
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Posted : 31/08/2022 3:20 pm
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Posted : 01/09/2022 3:06 pm
