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On the planet of Serenno....
Governor Nixon- What brings you to our humble planet of Serenno.
New Republic Officer Olc- We have heard reports that Serenno is having heavy Remnant influence. We are here to negotiate and assure you Governor that Serenno is just as important to us as any planet.
Governor Nixon- Well then, welcome! I look forward to what you have to offer. I have my office all ready prepped for negotiations.
New Republic Officer Olc- Good then! I look forward to it.
Holo Comander Rovern- Tk 546, has the package been placed.
Tk 546- Yes sir! We have set up everything and have men on the roof to detonate it.
Holo Comander Rovern- Good. Let the negotiations take place then.
Tk 390- You ready for this...
Tk 521- I hope so, whatever gives us control. I can't wait to see those dammed Rebels die!
Tk 390- Same here. We have lost so much. It is really a small price to pay to make the galaxy ours again.
Scout Trooper Tk 652- Are they in the building yet.
Tk 897- No sir, almost in though.
Scout Trooper Tk 652- Good, were going to light this place up!
Tk 897- Yeah, those Rebels will go back to the hell which they came!
Scout Trooper Tk 652- Yes... haha.
Governor Nixon- Officer, I hope you enjoy what I have brought. Got some relics here from the Clone War Era and some Holo-Art. It is my favorite I tell you!
New Republic Officer Olc- Yes, as do I. What beverages do you have I may ask?
Governor Nixon- I have the finest wine in all of Serenno and a good but of Spochca. What would you like.
New Republic Officer Olc- Oh! Spochca definitely. Where do you manage to get these fine delicacies on a planet like Serenno.
Governor Nixon- Serenno has improved little from the Clone Wars and the Reconquest of the Rim. However, there are still a few delicacies here.
New Republic Officer Olc- Good to know. What is that strange box on top of you holo-table?
Governor Nixon- Oh that! Was another relic I wanted to put up but couldn't because of room.
Sargent Breker- Looks like a bomb to me sir.
Governor Nixon- What! Nonsense. Why would I do such a thing.
Tk 897- sir, they're in.
Scout Trooper Tk 652- Ok, ~Comander, ready to light it up~.
Tk 564- Ok, thank you Tk 652, you can commence whenever you are ready.
Scout Trooper Tk 652- Ok lets do this. Long Live the Empire! Chk.....
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The Butcher Shop
Molak Tulwin owns and operates a butcher shop near the Governor's house on Serenno. One day he was causally doing his business when he heard a BOOM next door. He went out to see what happened and what he saw would scare him for rest of his life, the Governor's house in flames. He also saw Stormtroopers pulling out the Governor who looked injured and heard that New Republic officials attempted to assassinate the governor and failed because an Imperial Remnant had caught wind of the plan. Inside he knew that, Serenno was about to undergo a new era of change as this Imperial Remnant would now have a foot hold in Serenno....
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Fig-Bars/Cast
All Fig-Bars are Left to Right
The Imperials: Tk-897, Scout Trooper Tk-652, Tk-521, Governor Nixon, Tk-546, Tk-390
Civilians: Owen (Human SCS spy instructed to spread lies about bombing), Molak Tulwin (Human Butcher, owns 'Slops Meat')
The New Republic: Holen (Race Unknown NR Drop-trooper), Mike (Human NR Drop-trooper), Officer Olc (Bith NR Officer), Sargent Breker (NR Human Sargent)
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Hello once again my fellow players! I am so grateful for all your guys help with feedback to make this Moc spectacular! It was super fun and I loved the process. A little spoiler though, Serenno is probably now a SCS planet so just to let you know... I hope you enjoy the story and the Moc more then I did making it. Long Live the Empire!
This topic was modified 3 years ago by Comander Rovern
This topic was modified 3 years ago 2 times by RocketBoy
Posted : 18/03/2022 10:08 pm
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Nice wee build. I definitely appreciate the colour and variety from earlier drafts.
The butcher shop epilogue is a nice way to shift the perspective.
As a personal preference, I think the story would flow a little better if you integrated who the speaker was into the story.
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Posted : 19/03/2022 6:50 am
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@eyrezer What do you mean by that, like a little picture near them?
Posted : 19/03/2022 9:31 pm
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Eyrezer: It is currently set out like the script of a play.
”As opposed to more like a novel,” said Eyrezer expectantly.
See what I mean? ☺️ Personal preference but I prefer the second style.
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Posted : 20/03/2022 12:34 am
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Great build, good story fitting for the SCS, excellent minifig posing. I like the butcher shop.
Posted : 20/03/2022 2:22 pm
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@brickwolf thank you so much! I enjoyed it and was happy with the results even if I went outside of my comfornt zone.
This post was modified 3 years ago by Comander Rovern
Posted : 20/03/2022 3:06 pm
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Really great second entry. A lot of good details, like the butcher. It makes the scene feel more real. The build could be a little taller, and little more SNOT, but overall a good build!
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Posted : 29/03/2022 6:25 pm
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