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Ciamango
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It was a muggy day in the industrial district of Coronet City. The imperial assassination trooper watched the dark blue speeder his quarry was sitting in and drew his Blastech DH-23 heavy blaster pistol, ready to open fire. Suddenly the tuned engines of the quarry’s speeder rattled and the speeder quickly moved forward. The assassin jumped onto his Aratech 74-Z speeder bike and began shooting. A regular assassin or gunslinger would have been struggling to shoot while driving a speeder at a velocity of 300 clicks per hour. But this wasn’t his first mission and it wouldn’t be his last. The two speeders raced through the streets of Coronet.                                                          
 ”TK-1749, send your troopers to the northern industrial district, I have found our target“, he spoke into his comlink.
Yes sir!“, the trooper quickly answered.                          
After a short while the speeder arrived at an old warehouse. He saw his troopers already fighting with some gangster scum. He didn’t seem to be the only one who had brought backup. And it wasn’t going very well for the imperials. Blaster bolts passed his head very closely, a heavily armed Trandoshan gangster started shooting at him from a roof. He had to take action immediately. He started concentrating his fire on the engine of the speeder. It worked! The engine caught fire and the speeder started drifting away from the main street into a narrow alley. Then it crashed into an industrial building. The quarry fled into the alley. The assassin swung down from his speederbike and silently followed him…
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it! 
This topic was modified 2 years ago by RocketBoy
 
Posted : 14/05/2022 7:09 am
Comander Rovern
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 Epic build! Love the frame work and the speeder. Story is nice also. Hope you get that Scum!

 
Posted : 14/05/2022 10:25 pm
Ciamango
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@comander-rovern thank you very much!

I‘m glad you liked my story, I’m always not sure about writing things in english!

 
Posted : 15/05/2022 6:41 am
mike31
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Very nice! The structures and action look great! I do think the ground could use a bit more variety for this scene, but it's a nice technique! Keep up the great work!

 
Posted : 20/06/2022 8:27 pm
Ciamango
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@mike31 thanks a lot, I will see if I can bring in a bit more variation in my upcoming builds! 

 
Posted : 23/06/2022 5:57 pm
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Posted : 05/07/2022 5:36 pm