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Comander Rovern
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On the planet of Oba Dia...

-In the Obsidian Paradise-

-Music Playing- 

"Ho, Ho, Ho! What a splendid time it is!"- Exclaimed Don Boner in Alien Language.

"I'll have another of whatever you just gave me droid! It was great!"- Said Slave Master Syylk Loren.

"Yes Sir, I'll get to it as soon as I can."- Replied Cp-893.

"Ah! Finally a time to relax, we have had a couple exciting missions am I right Ren?"- Questioned Slaver Magus

"Yes! Finally a time to enjoy ourselves. That last mission was especially exciting with those Wookies."- Replied Slave Pilot Renal.

-A Short Time Later-

"What's that sound!?"- Questioned Don Boner in Alien Language.

"It's Imperials!"- Shouted General Tarnis of the White Skull Mercenary group.

"Don Boner! You have broken our deal! Why?"- Announced Comander Rovern.

"What! Nonsense. I have not broken our deal great one."- Replied Don Boner in Alien Language. 

"Yes you have. Our spies have confirmed it. Correct Agent Talus?"- Said Comander Rovern.

"Yes sir. Don Boner has broken his transaction with the Empire."- Replied Agent Talus (Twelik Spy.) 

"What! Tala you betrayed me!"- Shouted Don Boner in Alien Language.

"No, I never betrayed you. My loyalty is to the Empire and the Empire only."- Replied Agent Talus (Twelik Spy.) 

"Traitor! Guards kill her!"- Shouted Don Boner in Alien Language.

"I don't think so Boner."- Said Comander Rovern Calmly.

-Blast!-

-Music Stops-

"That's what happens when you betray the Empire Slug."- Said Comander Rovern.

"Sir. What do we do now.'- Asked Comander Perch.

"Dispose of this Slug. And give Agent Talus her uniform and a squad of let's say, 10 Troopers. This is your dominion now Talus."- Comander Comander Rovern.

"Yes Sir! This underworld will now be ours! Hail the Empire!"- Shouted Agent Talus.

"Yes. The Empire is now one step closer to having the galaxy again. Pheonix Squadron, let's go!." Shouted Comander Rovern....

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Fig-Bars/ Cast

Left to Right 

Imperials: Agent Ash, Agent Mika, Agent Grace, Agent Zaf, Senior Agent Samuel, Comander Rovern, Comander Perch, Tk 829, Tk 726, Tk 727, Tk 729.

The Boner Crime Family: Cp-893, Musician Owen, (Bith) Musician Ils, (Unkown) Band Leader Ioa, (Unkown) Dancer/ Staff Member Pertrisa, (Unkown) Don Boner, (Twelik) Imperial Spy/ Dancer Talus, Guard Mark, Guard Hix, Guard Paul.

Slavers: (Weequaw) Crew Member Til, Crew Member Magus, (Trandoshian) Crew Slaver Balk, (Zygarian) Slave Master Syylk Loren, (Zygarian) Senior Slave Master Sulka, Slave Crew Pilot Renal, (Klatooinian) Crew Member Rohon

The White Skulls Mercenary Company: (Mythral) Mercenary Walus, (Unkown) Mercenary Ssect, (Unkown) General Tarnis, (Zabrak) Lt. Maguis.

Smuggler Crew: (Unkown) Pilot Yul, (Unkown) Smuggler Tulin, Smuggler Leader Sam, (Klatooinian) Smuggler Wual, (Droid) Li-673


Hello my fellow builders! This is my newest moc. I was happy with the results even if it might not look good. I really wanted to show the gritty crowded feeling that the Star Wars underworld has sometimes. Thank you for reading and looking. Long Live the Empire!

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This topic was modified 2 years ago by RocketBoy
 
Posted : 03/04/2022 6:13 pm
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Nice little scene, with some good cantina details, like the waterpipe Don is smoking. When doing scenes like this you could consider framing it with one or two walls - that also makes it more confined, and creates space for interesting details like window panels or decorations. 👍 

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Posted : 06/04/2022 8:15 pm
Brickwolf
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Top notch minifigures! My favorite is the Mythrol!

 
Posted : 07/04/2022 9:12 pm
Comander Rovern
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@darth-bjorn Yes Sir! Thank you. To be honest, this build was a little more rushed so thats why I didn't put a ton of detail. Will consider it for future builds. Thanks.

 

 
Posted : 08/04/2022 12:35 am
Comander Rovern
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@brickwolf Thank You. Have had a ton of figs lying around so wanted to use them.

 
Posted : 08/04/2022 12:35 am
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Posted : 10/05/2022 8:59 pm