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[Entry build] The Scout's of Ordo

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headbaash
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The rumors are coming to light. An unknown entity has planted itself in an old, abandoned outpost several clicks due North. Shortly after receiving the coordinates that made this claim, all communication with that party was turned to static… The unrelenting buzzing is the only message they can relay now.

  Gherk Ordo, A Zabrak foundling, is the current leader of the clan. Marking his helmet with painted silver horns, a homage to his Zabrak roots. Entrusting the head of the scouting party (a fellow Zabrak, but an Iridonian woman named Fai) and their 2 most skilled accomplices to help him find what lies at the end of the static.

As night falls, the group settle into a small smuggler’s post they’ve come across. One of the many that litter the deserts of Ordo. Conversing, eating, and drinking while the howls and moans of the wildlife played on repeat. Almost as if they were serenading clan Ordo. A calming night one could presume, one much taken for granted. For they will soon come to realize, the veil they've lifted awaits unspeakable horrors… 

 
Posted : 19/02/2023 10:36 pm
Count_creations
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Nice entry build. Great to have another Mando'ade member 👍 

 
Posted : 21/02/2023 12:18 am
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headbaash
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@phoenix-bricks Thank you so much!

 
Posted : 21/02/2023 7:25 pm
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Welcome to Factions! 👋 Great first build, hyped for more of the storyline!

 
Posted : 26/02/2023 3:36 am
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Eyrezer
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Nice first entry. I like the story explanation for the silver horns. The story is set up well.

On the build, the shelter looks a little rushed. Maybe some tiling would have improved it. I like the speeders.


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Posted : 28/02/2023 1:03 am
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headbaash
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@eyrezer thanks I appreciate the advice! I’ll keep that in mind for the next lil shack I build.

 
Posted : 02/03/2023 9:23 pm
headbaash
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@cosmic-studios thank you so much! Can’t wait to make my next post, moc is done, just working on the story.

 
Posted : 02/03/2023 9:24 pm
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This entry has earned 4 XP

 
Posted : 04/04/2023 10:50 pm
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Welcome! Glad to see some more Mandos

 
Posted : 05/04/2023 8:03 pm
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