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Zero
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https://flic.kr/p/2qVVoys

 

Atravis, a planet in the Outer Rim, lies in grid square L-19. It is an unknown, beautiful world covered by vast thermal pools, their edges fringed by reef biomes. Gigantic plateau rock spires stretch across the planet due to thermal activity in the planet's core. In the regions without pools, vast fluorescent forests have grown, home to the deadliest creatures in the galaxy. Therefore, the natives have built their cities on the rocky peaks, with numerous landing pads around the rock formations. Entire civilizations live in the inner rock structures. The energy is generated by underground generators and powered by thermal activity in the ground. Food comes from the native plants and animals on Atravis and is known for healthy by-products. The higher you get in the cities, the wealthier you are. Some natives still live on the ground at the edge of the pools.


 
Posted : 05/04/2025 12:09 am
Captain Havok
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The texturing of the floor is really nice. I think the rock structures could use a bit of variation.


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Posted : 08/04/2025 1:41 pm
Darth Bjorn
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Nice build, but I'm missing the story.


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Posted : 09/04/2025 7:31 pm
Senate (Max)
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Mirroring Joe, the pillars seem a little unnatural, but the floor texturing/design looks exactly like what I imagine a flyover to look like!


 
Posted : 11/04/2025 1:53 am
gonkobonko
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7xp


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Posted : 13/04/2025 9:00 pm
Zero
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@captain-havok thanks! I was kinda low on dbg Gray parts during this time, I see what you mean


 
Posted : 19/04/2025 10:06 pm
Zero
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@the-senate Thank you, yeah I've recognised that when I finished the build too


 
Posted : 19/04/2025 10:07 pm
Zero
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@darth-bjorn Thank you very much! Its kinda short and too rough I know, I will make it better next time. Thank you for the feedback 🙌


 
Posted : 19/04/2025 10:08 pm