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VictorBuilds
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A Pilot’s Song

Several months after the fall of the Empire, the galaxy still bears the scars of war. Though the New Republic fights to rebuild and bring order to the stars, shadows of the past linger, refusing to fade. Among those who have helped shape this new era, Torin Val stands out, as a pilot of remarkable skill and with an unshakable sense of justice.
 
Born on a remote and unforgiving moon in the Outer Rim, Torin learned early how to endure hardship. The vastness of the sky above him was a promise, a call to something greater. He answered that call in the cockpit of his B-wing, carving his name into history through daring maneuvers and battles fought against Imperial remnants. Yet, for all his victories, he finds himself wrestling with a more elusive struggle. One that cannot be won with blaster fire or precision flying.
 
One of his refuges lies on Dalastine, a world of endless marshes and quiet waters. There, a simple fisherman’s cabin is perched on stilts above the ground, at the edge of a lake. Torin allowed himself to breathe here, for a few days of leave. The hum of repulsorlifts and the crackle of comlink chatter are replaced by the whisper of the wind, and the rhythmic lapping of water against the shore. Sitting by the water’s edge, a steaming cup in his hands, he watches the golden light of a distant sun ripple across the surface. On the other side of the lake, he can distinguish the operational base the New Republic is building on the planet. Various ships come and go, bringing furniture, messages, and people. His starfighter is patiently waiting for him there, sitting on a landing platform, longing to be started again.
 
Torin knows the war is not truly over. He knows his skills may yet be called upon. But here for a brief moment, he surrenders to stillness. In this solitude, far from the roar of turbolasers, he sings a song he wrote in his cockpit : 
 
The starlight fades, the dark runs deep,
No voice to call, no vow to keep,
The thrusters burn, the hull grows cold,
A tale long told, yet never old.

A pilot's fate is dust and steel,
No roots to grow, no ground to feel.
But if I land, if I stand still,
Will the stars shine for me still ?
No world will wait, no heart will glow,
No name to carve in stone below.

Yet still I fly, yet still I roam,
For skies are vast, but none are home.

I've seen the fire, I've seen the blast,
Watched brothers fall and fade to past,
I've chased the dawn, I've danced with death,
My name's a ghost in engine's breath.

Yet still I fly, yet still I roam,
For stars may shine, but not as chrome.

 
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Singing tip
I imagine the melody close to the Song of Durin by Clamavi de Profundis, pretty easy if you want to sing it like Torin (or Thorin) 😉
 
 
 
 
 
This topic was modified 3 weeks ago by VictorBuilds
 
Posted : 31/01/2025 11:11 am
Sentinel_Brix
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Your build conveys the peace and calm of the words and lyrics. This entry is standing out not only because it's tremendously well visually executed, but mostly because it touches the soul of the reader. It's like the character knows, he is not finished with fighting and changing the fate of the galaxy with his trigger finger, but found a moment to breath - before a new storm is rising.

The song is lovely. I immediately thought about the scene in The Hobbit, where the dwarves would sing. After seeing the spoiler, I know why 😊  

What a great start 👍  

And thanks for giving me a hint how to properly upload images here.

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Posted : 01/02/2025 10:24 pm
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Love the elevation of the building, and the posing of the fig here is great.

GM / Faction Leader of ARGO Industries

 
Posted : 19/02/2025 9:24 am
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29xp

 
Posted : 22/02/2025 7:45 pm