Great story! The tram is very cool too.

I really like the light and the water. The loose debris was a nice touch.

I think you may need to change some of your picture names on bricksafe. It's pulling in pictures from a different build.

Nice use of the Exo-Force hair. Your immersive shot link is broken btw.

Nice colour choices. The escape pod looks great.

Your minifig choices never disappoint! Great little build, captures the star wars alley nicely.