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brickmadsam
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The people of Lahag Erli have risen up against an Imperial Remnant that has sought to pillage their once lush planet for its natural resources and ancient artefacts.

The village has been decimated, leaving one girl, Peri Bodine, to stand alone against the might of the Imperials.

As her grief-stricken friend, Dal, holds his dying mother in his arms, Peri readies her blaster at the village's once-grand Entrance Archway, with the Imperial troops closing in around her.

She steals a look at the Tie Fighter that destroyed much of her village, now laying crashed mere meters away, and allows herself to remember what it felt like when they took it down...that one fleeting moment of triumph in an otherwise grim battle for survival.

Now, back in the moment, she raises her blaster and says to herself, "This will not be your last day...it will be theirs!"

The odds may be stacked against the girl.... but the force is with her!

 

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This topic was modified 3 years ago 2 times by brickmadsam
 
Posted : 24/03/2022 1:16 pm
brickmadsam
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For some reason I can't seem to edit that broken link for the cinematic and in-depth video. So here it is:

 
Posted : 24/03/2022 1:27 pm
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That's Epic man! Love the build and its great. Awesome video and story ass well.

 
Posted : 24/03/2022 11:51 pm
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Sam, so much to like about this build. I really appreciate the irregular shaping at the front including the two colours. The broken pavement works really well and I want to try that mixel joint technique myself. The build also has really nice height.

As Brickman would say, the build has lots to draw your attention and then lots to keep it. The details of the crashed TIE fighter, the trooper helmets, etc all tell a story.

Great build!


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Posted : 25/03/2022 8:57 am
Brickwolf
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Beautiful build! Very SW! Lots of great details: the broken up road, crashed tie fighter, destroyed arch, ruined buildings.  Regretably the pics are quite small.

 
Posted : 26/03/2022 12:45 pm
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I love the color palette! It requires discipline and self-constraint to stick it out through a build that big. 😉 Some details are a bit rough around the edges, and I don't care too much for hair-pieces off by a few degrees, but that's really nitpicky with this beautiful build. Great work!

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Posted : 29/03/2022 8:16 pm
brickmadsam
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@darth-bjorn thanks heaps for the feedback, there are a few section I could tighten up for sure. With her hairpiece I deliberately tried to have it slightly skewed to try and get a kinda sideways look, but I guess I didn’t quite pull it off 😩

 
Posted : 09/04/2022 7:27 am
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[Admin] This entry has scored 22 XP.
(A bug prevented my editing the original post. Apologies!)

This post was modified 3 years ago by RocketBoy

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Posted : 10/05/2022 8:46 pm